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Old 04-18-05, 02:42 PM   #7
Calm
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i thought this was wonderful. your imagery was nice. i liked how u used metas to paint very vivd pictures. your use of vocabulary was amazing. very extensive which i liked. to anyone who's not big on vocab they would have gotten lost but i thought it added a nice element to this piece.

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I am before before...
Before death is eternity, After death is eternity.
There is no death, only eternity.
And I be riding the wings of eternity...



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