This Was Ok...things Wrong Damn Theres Alot You Have Like Basically Zero Visual Which Is Not Good At All Also Vocab Is Like 1st Grade Here Which Basically Really Hurt This Poem I Liked How You Jumped Off Topic But It Was Actually Expected It Seems As If I Read This Before Dont Know If I Did But This Aint Good You Need To Work On Vocab And Imagery I Will Che K Your Future Pieces As Well

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