word...it was pretty dope......rhyme scheme i thought coulda been better, better structured too, but still, it was good.....ending was good....last couple bars then the chorus (or whatever).......i enjoyed it

while I take this life step by step inch by inch minuet by minuet
take a step in to my shoes man I dont even know where to begin it
^ yes to that......aight, keep up....ps, can you check out mine

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