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Old 04-18-05, 05:50 PM   #12
Stanza
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Voted For: iLL Cee

O~K~K~K

This is what I Think

Ill C
So unoriginal its sad when u steal ur name from G-Unit..
He had a undefeated record but battling me he Blew-It..
.: Aii Opener made me Giggle LOL but not laugh :.
"Liven" in the Life of a Convict No chance Escapen Me..
Some "Legend" not even enough respect to get a Collab-See..
.: Nice Punch But you stession To make it ryme that time :.
Wishen me Luck but a Leprichan Couldnt Save-You..
As My punches beat u down my Flow Enslaves-You..
.: Nuttin specail :.[b]
Your Chances were Slim to non biten off more then u can chew..
Cause you KNOW ur bad when u get dissed by ur own Crew..
[b].: OMFG !! That Was Jus Oh mayne NICE!!! :.

OVERALL:

aii based on your verse you hade somoe very good bars one or two i didnt like but they were aii so outta your 4 bars
I liked 3/4 so Id give your verse a Rating of 75% which Is good considering you only did 4 bars NICE VERSE Mayne especially the Ending


King Y@Yo
Im tellin u dawg ur way of ur league iLL Cee,
Hes all ova these vets dick like Monic and Bill C
come on mayne you know that wasnt good
I think u need to go back where u came from,
Cuzz u choke up so much im thinkin u to dumb
No Mayne ......
Using a lot slang lets see if ur fast enough to hang,
Dont think u can cuzz smoking herbs is my thang
come on man .... You know you Aint gettin this
In dis battle dawg ur herb ass cant see me,
Look in front of u and nothin is wut u st-ill Cee
Better but Still

OVERALL:
You jus know you didnt win rii?..... So im not gonna explain myself but i do have some advice go and try to elevate a little in the Cyphers and Freestyle a little but every here and there and you will get your talent back (I hope)

Good luck in the future


[u]RTF in N e one of the battles in my sig PLEASE!!!! [u]
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