Voted For: Stanza

Stanza
Ghand think cuz he MaddCow his flow is sick
I seen betta combo'z & controls comin from my PS2 joystick
Eh....not really feeling it..
Watch This Old Time Preacher Get Murked with Soul
he's The Only kid In Pre-K tryna get the Triangle in the Hole
Ha, decent punch...
This Guy Thought he was a DJ bcuz he wasDick Jumping
Well We Know Now what You Would Do for a Klondike bar
Only time intentional misrhyming is OK is if there's a massive punch getting set up on the second line...not this one..
Only Three bars Completed And U Already Starting To Sweat
Ghand get to far in Debt Now Its His Life he wants to bet?
Alright...
Wait Lemme stop B4 I have to Drop and roll This wack Punk
Bcuz this nigga can Do 5 bars[b]-& I Still cant Get [b]drunk[b/]
Alright, this was a pre-defensive punchback...
Well I was gonan stop at five but damn This merkin Shit is fun
Lemme know when U Want me to Stop The bullets in da Gun
Good finish...

Ghand
Man your punches ain't effecting me, there too light weight*
My hot punches will literally take ove your flow'z having you dehydrate
Played, but OK rhyme...
This kat really think he's hot?, kid posted "suicide", he should've done it to himself*
No one post an reply in 2 months, should've put them whack rhymes on the bookshelf
OK personal..
Man how you got in the dopest crew around? And you havent established sikness?*
Look at this kid sig, He busting caps, but i'm standing wondering where the bullets went.*
Good..
You no where near elevation, cause kid you more weaker than them abortion kids
................If you and me had the same culture, still you wouldnt win this race bitch
Filler was awful, punch was forced..
like in your sig. This is far from over, your hotness is fading like a sunset*
You should never gamble with me, cause you just lost your Win like roulette
Terrible closer...played as fuck..

Stanza- You kind of alternated with lines that were hot and lines that were stale, but you had a solid enough finish and more consistency. You didn't really murk Ghand, but you did take this one.

Ghand- Some good personals...lines 4-8 were alright, but I really wasn't feeling the rest of your verses. Just my opinion. Personals were working fine for you, you should have strictly stuck with those, but work on the closer...

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