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Old 04-18-05, 06:23 PM   #22
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Voted For: efecx

sticks an stones will break yo bones an words will always hurt you.
but since you facing a magician in my vision they about to merk you.
Eh....
you beating me will never happen like jack da ripper doing jail time.
ill probably be punished if i get beat by nigga wit lame rhymes
Second line was just empty..
you was probably sittin down writing rhymes cause you almost
answered too late.
and when i beat you wit your written rhymes your excuse will be im trying to elevate
Alright punch..
you knew you wouldnt fit in rv so you put an x at the end of your name to look cool
but if yo rhymes aint good yo name lookin like a damn fool.
Uh....weak finish...


u cant make it rappin so u create a rapper n call it the apprentice
thats wat u are in rappin your still learnin how to write a sentence
Eh opener...
u can go and drink coffee wit other people i murdered at central merk
every1 is talkin bout reincarnation and u talk about your first birth
I liked the central merk line..
u see how smart he is on biography he says he is a rapper in the makin
ure battle record is now 0-0 but the record of 0-1 is in the creation
OK..
i checked and see you got beaten by people called tommy guns and effect
u can add a new name 2 that list wit a note sayin i got merked by efecx
Alright....the point's more important than how it was achieved I guess..
people critize your work and say improve and your record will recoupe
so u take it to go work on your wordplay so u go and make alphabet soup
Nail in the coffin.

Basically, mage didn't come hard at all..efecx had wordplay working in his favor and some good punches, better closer on his part..
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