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Old 04-18-05, 07:56 PM   #7
Stanza
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Voted For: generic disease

Ok This iS what i feel

GD
Ya Structure was slopp but ya verse made some sense althoough your opener was pretty weak id excuse You for that ........you should work on controlling your Structure bcuz all those marks makes it hard to read so ..... try to work oin that in the future

PD

Your structure was very sloppy to but .....your verse also lost me at some pionts which messed you up big time if you was trying to get some votes ....which is rally on of the main goals of the verse ..... I dont know what to tell you Except for try to elevate a little and youll get better

RTF .....IN Any of the battles in my sig HONESTLY DONT HATE VOTE PREZIDICT

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