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Old 04-18-05, 08:44 PM   #10
LyricalMa$tamind
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Voted For: generic disease

im battlin this bitch for the hell of it, im gunna swat this prick
he doesnt even got respect for himself
.................................he named himself "PREZ-A-DICK!"
^^^AVERAGE OPENER
ill give it to you straight, homie you just flat out suck
his chances of lossin is like a thunder storms hitten..
...then hes gunna get struck!
^^^IIGHT LINE
your bein ripped, you and your rhymes are as soft as silk
niggaz family has to eat cereal wit forks...
........just to conserve milk!
^^^^WAAAAAAAAAAACCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKK N PLAYED
just like ya sig, when he sees me he "always be movin"
cuz even if a vet was workin on ya....
............."ya still couldnt be improvin"
^^^PRETTY GOOD LINE
he cant catch up wit my lyrics, nah son your "too slow"
the only win in his record is when he paid the guy to "no show"
^^^NICE LINE AS WELL
relatin to stats nigga, you always gonna be "below"
cuz son you couldnt find luck...
....even if you found a pot of gold on a rainbow
^^^DECENT CLOSURE

Generic Disease- MOS OF UR SHIT WUZ IIGHT.SUM PUNCHES CAME REAL WEAK BUT MANY LANDED. I LIKEED UR USE OF WORDPLAY AND PERSONALS TO TRY N MURK UR OPPONENT. ELEVATION IZ NEEDED NO DOUBT. SOM SHIT WUZ BASIC BUT FOR DA MOS PART UR VERSE WUZ PRETTTY AVERAGE.
7/10


PReZidict

thorn a killa?? please, been here "longer" than me & still "fallin off" like glueless weave
u got "gerber" lines.........even when "babies" read ya shit dey dont give u "feed"*
^^^IIIGHT OPENER
u should be ashamed of ya raps, son jus "hide yaself" like "disgraceful bats"
any1 who reads ya writtens jus laugh, cuz dis "puss not focused" like "distracted cats"
^^^O.K
"disease a crotch"..........u create da "illness" inside "nook"**
funny, u gettin more "zeros put in ya frame" than a name "portrait of murda mOOk
^^^HA HA GOOD LINE
PreZ got him shook, u "nervous" let go ya "pen" before u "scare da book!"
u baked nigga but far from cooked, my lyrics indicate a vet...urs signal a rook!
^^^NAHH NOT REALLY DAT GUD
"mammal rings"..............u gon get "married 2 animals"
y u put "meat" on da screen?? my verse "ate" urs like a digital "cannibal!"
HA HA HAD ME LAUGHIN

nigga u slay me, i prey-thee...keep ya "ass seated" like ya "crack is lazy"
move packs..fiends pay me, while dis "rabbit's generic disease" consists of "rabies"***
^^^AVERAGE CLOSURE


PREZIDICT- MOS OF UR LINES RAN WAY TO LONG. UR STRUCTURE WUZ FUCKED.IT WUZ HARD 2 READ B/C OF TRYIN 2 CRAM 2 MANY LYRICS IN 1 LINE. I LIKED UR PERSONALS AND PUNCHES DOE. U NEED TO ELEVATE AS WELL. FOR A NEWB U R IIGHT. KEEP ELEVATIN N U B IIGHT.

MY V/ GENERIC DISEASE

CUD U CHECK OUT MAH BATTLE VS. LFS PLEASE VOTES AND FEED R NEEDED 4 BOF OF US
THANX
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