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Old 04-18-05, 10:43 PM   #4
Stanza
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Voted For: Wicked One

Well

SICK INTENT

your verse was very hard to read with all those marks and Spaces and sloppy structure man ..... Thats not what you want when your battling you should be doin Two bars then a space or Jus typing all str8 down two bars Aligned or smethin like that but yo verse was still Not hitting or connecting you jus came with some basic threats which was not all that you need .....So im jus sayin i hope that you elevate ......But yet i dont think that you took this battle
Sorry

Wicked One

Aii You Had a Good example of how a verse should be which is a nice opener and then Some Good bars in between then giving it to the openent hard at the end so That was a good example of how a verse should be far as your punchz go my Fav one was the one before the last Very Original man keep up the good work

PLEASE!!!!

RTF in the link that Has me Vs Mahatma Ghand I only need one more vote Then its over ... So B4 you hit up any other battle check that one out first
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