Voted For: Lay-Text

Well i think this battle was pretty much one sided... Golden dayz i have seen alot better from you and your first 16 lines were just basic i was hoping for alot more but you didnt show me anything... the last last were good and you dealt more on the imagery asp[ect but you didnt stay consistent with the emotion or imagery throughout the whole verse and thats where you went wrong

Lay-Text:

You had a pretty solid piece i have seen better from you as well... i was a bit dissapointed but you still brung enough to the table to win thie battle.. you had better imagery and the emotion was ok but you werent really creative you let your vocabulary take over and that can hurt a verse and you know that but it was still solid enough to win this battle

vote: Lay-Text

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