not good at all.you need an original topic. This is simple as fuck.I wouldnt even class this as a topic.
I class these as wanna-b drop. Your not a slinga,so why rhyme about it? try rhyming bout shit the is relevant to you.about your life instead of the guy you wish you were.

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Rhymes- to simple, you using end line rhymes. try using multis.
vocab, plain and simple.boring, try extending your vocab. read a dictionary or somthing.
content/topic. allready stated my thoughts on this.
structure is good.
flow is ok.

overall- not even worth me rating.
get original fam, then you will start to elevate.

pz