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Old 04-19-05, 06:41 AM   #3
wez_nilez
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aiight nice beat...emcees delivery needs alot of work...flow is too stiff lyrics r too simple word play to simple as well.production is pretty weak...punch lines r mad soft and inneffective man...ummm use more similies and metas and more complex vocab and punch lines
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