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Old 04-19-05, 10:22 AM   #15
Dirty Nigga
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Voted For: Golden Dayz

lol...
curious ta peep this battle after the thread in LL

Lay-Text, good imagery, good creativity, not enuff ta win the battle...

you went off topic repeatdly with lines such as:
''I Don't Know What To Do..For 3 Days The Moon Has Been Blue..''
^^^
other than you going off topic on a few occassions, pretty solid battle, with a creative scheme behind it, just not enuff ta get the win...

Golden:
nice peice, solid drop, consistancy throught, stayed on topic, creativity an imagination of the topic was edvident in lines such as:
No money, no women, no restrictions on any time,
No rhymes, no crimes, and decisions no longer ruin great finds.
^^^
had a nice flow ta the peice when you read it....vocab was good from both, more consistancy an better scheme an meaning ta the peice gets golden my vote...

Lay-Yext, step your topic game up, creativity was good, but you gotta word an peice it together correctly, having good imagination will not get you far in topics unless you can use your ideas correctly...an you cant.

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Crew vote removed
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