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Old 04-19-05, 01:51 PM   #2
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...Syck Intent is real..*he stay slangin'*...
and MC not sure of his sexuality...
so *he stay swingin'*..
.pfftt...this kid ain't real
...the onli tyme M C's Hood is watching *documentaries of gang-banging...*

you might want to fix up that flow, so it is structurd because of RV

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aint gunna work, your lines have to be like

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ight 1
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