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Old 04-19-05, 02:27 PM   #2
Calm
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this was aiight i guess. average wordplay and metas. topic not too original but it got piints for enjoyment value. multis were ok and all that.. i'm just looking for more creativity. too many played concepts within this piece. but keep doin ya thing... peace
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-Transcending The Heavens-
I am before before...
Before death is eternity, After death is eternity.
There is no death, only eternity.
And I be riding the wings of eternity...



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