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Old 04-19-05, 02:46 PM   #5
Calm
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this was aiight... i wouldve loved to see more creativity. the topic was sorta bland. being that its been used a thousand times over. a different approach or different wording woulda made this dope. but u can tell a story pretty decent. work on your metas was well. overall a aiight drop.... feed on sum of my work when u get a chance
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