this was tight man....liking the flow, and the not-overusing vocab, haha, i think you put your ideas together very well on this........you are a talented writer.......here is my fav lines

What makes you think that this is a tasteful read
You could never write if you’re afraid to bleed
Soon you will see the destiny I’m choosing for me
My mind is a ocean the verse is a boat in the sea

word, keep up yo....and can you RTF, thanks, if not.....whatever

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