i think you would be a lot better if like instead of trying to come up with funny ass punches like worry about the ends of ur lines rhyming....like thats one of the biggest things people look for in a battle...that it rhymes..once u get that down then you re-word your verses to rhyme and flow together.....you come up with some creative stuff if you would just get dat rhyming part down you would potentially be D-O-P-E......thats my fee bruh

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