Voted For: MaRVJay1009

You killed him!
Opener:
da best? yea im simply,no written dis a quick key.
redzone's record is like "oprah" cuzz its "win-free".
Nice line. the win-free line killed em'
Middle:
im sick b,marvjay's da mc most of you rv cats fear.
since u '0-3' afta i merk u u'll be "04" like "last year".
that was a nice punch. Like the use of last year, that was tight.
Closer:
........trust me i got guns fam if i pull it heads blown.
like "farve at da goal line" i'll "throw bullets in da REDZONE".
THis was a little weak. You coulda done alot better on this line.

REDZONE
you can't be serious, mah eagles bomb on ya like brett Farve fa tha packers...
guranteed ta eat cha like cow nuts fa tha money on fear factor...
kinda weak. it was iight....i guess
MarvJay findin out tha Hardaway, I'm shootin shots atcha life...
neva think twice pullin ya green card and get cha family swiped...
didn't rhyme well at all. the second line in this punch was iight
you a pussy wit a period, use ta leakin alot...
tha barrel'll leave permanent time-out in tha case ya speakin alot...
nothin. i repeat.....nothin
Ya amuse me, fillin mah laughter as I develope ya slaughter...
kidnap ya seed, let Mike Jackson fondle and mangle ya daughter...
Iight, but you shouldah said son. michael jacksoon likes little boys.. this line killed it for you


Marv: all together your verse was better than Zonez. you came harder with the punches. you put ore thought into your shit.
Zone:
shouldah came with harder punches

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