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Old 04-20-05, 04:01 PM   #16
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weak battle.....

genereic disease-

im like an airplane except when I "land" a punch your eyes-pop instead of your ears
suddenly you fall to the ground people crowd around your eyes are re(a)d with tears
not feelin it.....2/10
battling noobs cause your greedy until you lose cause you know, you’ll never beat-me
could never defeat me being my personal butcher is the only way you would “meet me”(meet or meat)
weak........2/10
only way you could put me in a coma is with a decent auroma but since you stink that’s not gonna happen
keep it to your self hang your career up on a shelf don’t you notice noones clappin you need to quit rappin
poor structure.....weak punch...1/10
im gonna rip-you like a wet tissue and both of us know that noone will miss-you cause your wack
there’s no returning, cause your not worth burning take out a pen and start learning cause you cant come back
weak punch...terrible structure..bad flow...1/10

OVERALL SCORE-6/40(15%)

Solo-

Beggin To Be In LS..Ya Ass Is Actin Like A Hoe The Way U On Ya Knees…
Even Ya So-Called Illness Is Basic..Don’t Wanna Catch That Generic Disease…*
decent personal...4/10
Can’t Spit Hard Shit..Ya Lines Packin Nuthin But Fluff Like Bathroom Towels…
Dawg Face It Ya Rhymes Stink..Even You Said Every Vowel You Spit Is Foul…*
str8 personal......5/10
Drop A Filler Line To Help..I Know U One Of Those Who Don’t Believe-In-Us…
But I Ain’t Gotta Be Smart To Win..Notice He’s Only Optimistically A Genius…*
not feelin it....3/10
I Just Got Personal On Ya..Now I’m A Switch Style Like Rocky In Number 3…
Dude Loves Nature..Named “Woodpecker Dick” The Way U Humpin Trees…
nah..........2/10
I’m Gonna Put Colour To This Line To Compensate For Your Fuckin Dull Spit…
Think You Gone Win Battles Wit Multies..Thats Just More Times The Bull Shit…
decent......6/10
To Finish You Off I’m Gonna Give Ya Hope..Check It I’ll Spit A Basic Rhyme…
Step Up, We Tossin Clocks In Bins..Cuz Battlin You Is Just Me Wastin Time…
Played.....0/10

OVERALL SCORE-20/60(33.3%)

yall boiz need to elevate..................
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