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Get Cooked Hoe
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Yo The flow of your verse is aiight. Words and the expressions was good, you had good imaginary, upp your emotion though. Words are creative. I say this a good drop.
My fav lines is...............
The more that you read you’ll notice the focus in me
The goals that I’ve reached and others that I hope to achieve
Soon you will see the destiny I’m choosing for me
My mind is a ocean the verse is a boat in the sea
Every word that you read gets me closer to free
My success is oxygen…Its supposed to be breathed
Upp your vocab.
Keep it up fam.
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