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Old 04-20-05, 09:52 PM   #9
Logic The Goonie
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Voted For: DeadlyVision

LE-first of all, the "better chance no-showing" punches are played to all hell. Delivery is good for the effect you were attempting I suppose but not very good for a diss track. Flow is pretty choppy. Lyrics started at ok and went downhill towards the end of the track. Personally I don;t like the approach. 5/10

DV-I can barely hear you. I like your flow. Delivery is dope. Lyrics are decent. lol@gunit101 line. It's true that coming on the suicidal tip is played against dude, God knows why you did it. But overall 7/10

v-DV

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