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Old 04-21-05, 01:15 AM   #42
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Voted For: Kin*Ethic™

Big City:

He couldn’t get sick wit a nasty germ
That fact is ya structure crashed and burned like Mc hammers tax return
^^good multies and meta but stretched 6/10
Ya rhymes is shit son, its really showin in ya vowels
U treat battles like washing machines, u always throwin in the towel
^^dope bar 9/10
The demands’ll be final,… u and ya mans will b bridal
Just like tha mage in ya sig,… your lil fantasy’s final
^^good meta and personal 8/10
City comin thru, gunnin dudes, give him a hundred blues
Can’t have illegitimate kids, so I’ll admit to Son’n YOU
^^good bar 6/10
Listen dirt bag, I squirt mags, suffocate you with my jerk rag
U aint hard just becuz it says, Triple X on ya shirt tag
^^woo fire 10/10
DAMN….After u, dog I’ve seen the worst
How u gon b about kinetics when u can’t MOVE people to read ya verse
^^good meta but stretched 6/10

Overall: 45/60 (75%)

Kinethic:

Punches are Aim'd-To-Do-Harm & 'Run All Over City' like a police Chase-In-A-Car .. Only tracks u lace are Blazed-On-Ya-Arms So punches leave 'Big City Out Of Place' like Hicks Raised-On-The Farm!! (KO?)
^^dope bar nice multies and metas 14/20
Ya this Newb-Is-Sick once i Spew-The-Shit & 'Hit Every City Corner' like my Crew-Be-Pimps! .. ya punches dont Move-Me-Bitch but mine 'Destroy The Big City' like day after tommorrow Movie-Clips!!
^^wooo fire again 18/20
Im Landing-Cuts-Demanding-Such a Commandin-Bluff while u just Rambling-Stuff! .. U prolly Planning-To-Duck cuz ill 'Quickly Put An End To Cit/Sit' like Standing-Up!!
^^dope bar again 8/10
Punches break ur Tooths-&-Ears & Bruise-Ya-Beard! .. Ill Have ya Crew-Get-Smeared & Punch Threw-They-Gear! Plus ill 'Flip & Shake The Big City' Like New York Snow Globe Sovenieurs!!
^^nice shit 8/10

Overall: 48/60 (80%)

Dope fucking battle probably the best i have seen in FL since i was battling here

Vote: Kinethic
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