Okay okay, let me check this one out...

What I personally liked the most were the questions you asked because they are a nice add-on to the piece. Strongest aspect was the emotion of course, no doubt about that. As a reader you could really feel and experience the anger the person's going through because it is so well expressed, so vivid and real. I find your choice of vocabulary very good because you kept it rather simple which makes the message you bring more powerful.

Dope drop!

DQ

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