Voted For: The Black Plague
aight battle but final has came harder b4
compose-seems like your verse jsut didnt have anything really that good in it...the only punches that came close to hitting were the 2nd and 4th lines...coodve improved on tons of stuff, like multies, punches, werdplay, opener, closer, and vocab...3/10
TBP-loved your verse... my favorite line was the one bout farting after takin the meat out, that was nice...you also had alright vocab...the only things i didnt like about your verse was that they coodve had more multies and9 it also seemed like it got worse as the end of it approached...nice verse though...6/10
v/ the black plague
please RTF this battle
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