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Ha this was a nice OM'
you had nice structure , pretty decent wordplay,
I think you could have elevated alittle bit more on feeling and emotions..
You had nice imagery, that closer was fiya cus nice,
overall this was a good peice , havent seen anything from you so this waxs a good
first drop, hope you continue dropping nice OM's like this , and making my job worth time nice drop, .. hope to see more
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