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Hmmm. this was a decent drop...
It was an okay , 'diss' ... think you could have done alot better
Your structure was okay maybe nextime you can try to match up your bars
feeling was good , i can see this took a little effort to do .
Had a couple nice punchlines , couple nice multies, and personals
overall think this was an okay drop, hope to see some more work from you
advise: try to put some imagery , like better wordplay , and vocab,
keep it up an thankz for dropping a link
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