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Ah,... you really forced your mutlies, in that first two bars
Your structure was off, you feeling and emotions were okay,
but could have been alot better..
i feel that you could have took alittle more time and used alittle more
effort into this drop ..maybe made it alittle longer ,
next time try to match up your barz, elevate on your wordplay and vocab ,
use alittle more imagery , and you'll be str8 ..
keep it up and LEAVE A LINK! or this will be closed
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