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Old 04-21-05, 04:28 PM   #12
morse code
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Voted For: MC Firetruck

mc got this one...the battle WAS kinda close thoguh

affinity-my favorite line was the 2nd one...i liked some of your punches but the majority of them didnt hit hard enuff and were all plays on hsi name...the structure was nice thoguh,and good flow...coodve had more multies....i also wasnt feeling the opener or closer...

mcfiretruck-loved the closer, the flow was alright, good punches, nice werdplay too...the only things needing improvement were multies, and vocab....i liked this verse

overall-

opener-MC
closer-MC
flow-A
vocab-A
puncehs-MC

i actually thoguh this was a nice battle

v/mc firetruck

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