ok well im gonna tell you right now that people here are close minded that wouldnt know a good concept if it jumped up and slapped its dick in thier face... i personaly liked that because i enjoy some metal as well as rap. now that strikes me more of a goth metal type thing like slipknot would do. see everyone, rap is poetry... country music is poetry and yes METAL IS POETRY... if it can be sung, screamed or vibed to then it is poetry and THIS IS POETRY... i give it a 10/10 because first of all u posted it here knowing people would hate it because its a rap site and 2 because it is REALLY REALLY good!!! from one poet to another, keep up the good work