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Voted For: Wicked One
holy shit LMAO..wtf happend to 5 lines??
first of all syck intent u got to calm down wit all dat **)(_--0 shit....that makes ur verse like it make u not want to read that shit...
wicked-that 50 cent shit was a lil funny i might have to bite dat lol...wicked u kept ur verse nice simple complex.....ur vocab was there.....ur punches hit good..overall good verse..syck intent u have da ability to have a dope verse but ur structure was FUCKED UP...you got to make it legible for the reader not for ya-self u got to get us to like it..dont believe dat bullshit about if u like it dats all dat matters...who eva u tryin 2 impress u got to do it for..hope that helps you out in future battles....good battle ~1~
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