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Old 04-21-05, 10:55 PM   #8
.M.See
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Voted For: Phenom-in-all

Premanition- I like the beat and the way you flowed on it.
Your flow from the start till fuel upon the fire was good. 1-2 Multis....Punches ehhh....Personals were ok

Fave Line -
you be hearin wot say like I sed it in the pulpit
shootin with a full clip
you be wearin red so I hit you like a bull hit

Worst Line-
Am I rattlin you that wot I set out to do
I don’t fail at anything got Cinderella her shoe
^^ The Fuck?

Overall Nice Verse: 8/10

Phenom- This for you was a Personal Feast...Alot Of Good Personals...Multis Eh...Punches>Personals So You Aced That

Fave Line-
loser... Why you gon go and call out the best
Did you forget the KO I last stamped on ya forehead?

Worst Line-
Ya thats right, heres another KO for Prem see
How could I possibly lose, battlin a femcee....OWNED

Overall: 9/10 cuz of personals