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Hm... this would have been alot better..
Your structure was decent , maybe next time you can match up your bars..
Your punchlines were okay, feel some were weak, could have been alot better..
Elevate on your wordplay , and your vocab , try to use better words..
not just that simple stuff, cus not all the time will it come out good,
Try not to worse your mutlies, let em just flow...
but overall just keep it up , and you'll elevate over time .
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