|
|
IP:
Hm... this was okay ,not the best ive seen..
your punchlines were okay, some were just weak , the best punchline was:
Go ahead and try me, if you think that you nice
But I'ma give you a "piece of advice" like the "letters 'I E'" *
^ i was feeling that ,
the other stuff were just played , and too simple for me..
your structure was decent , but you need to try to match up your bars...
keep it up , elevate next time try not to use the same word to rhyme with ,
elevate your wordplay/ vocab , and Drop a link or this will get closed...
some honest feed back ...
__________________
The Competition
|