nice piece...when reading it, i was think wow these thoughts are scattered about and cood be organized better...tahn i read the end, and that made everything better for it showed the reasonging and thought behind the organization...liked this piece for i know people who are in the same situation, good, try to get more in detail though thats the only thing, but werd your definitly an up and coming poet on here

plaes leave feed on any of my poems (any that you see of mine, some are in sig some arent) thanx alot