You need longer bars.
A bar is two lines.

At the moment you dont have much flow. this is because your bars are short.
try this.......

sup ma fuckers you know im new to the game
Im the type that could become famous with no name
I was put here simply and perfectly to remain
age increase's but im still gone be the same
call me a teacher and witness the champion's i train
Im a versitile devil, no fear of the gods i slain
Im here ready to agnite this,im rightous to claim
By pops musta been crazy ,cause he planted satin's seed
Im so vicous if you take my head off it will take days to bleed
Im still stnading string even with the hatred i heed
I aint a crip,so reconize the blood i need
You will have to be dope for me to drink like dracula
if you hate,then to the deeps of hell i cast ya ...........

you feel me?
you sorta gotta stretch your lines to make more sense, otherwise the reader wont get a mental picture.
This isnt too bad, just need to work on your flow. have some stronger lyrics, and use more extensive vocab.

keep dropping real shit man.

*edit*

dont listen to the hater above me, he is talentless so he cant teach you a thing.