Thread: D-Thug vs evil
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Old 04-22-05, 12:15 PM   #8
confidential
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This was feedback posted for evil

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Yo, im gonna kill this emcee who thinks he is cold*
Your 17..and you can’t beat a 13 year old?*
Some pretend thug man I give you pity
You think you big? You couldn’t be big if you were pam Anderson tity
Im blowing you over like you were in a shipwreck just hanging on
Im sorry you probally be still sucking dicks like Elton john
My disses are like you hitting a stone wall
Just 1 blow your still gona fall
Dude you rap and your from who the hells knows? Plz tell me your location
I beat you quick like a girl touch your dick and you had premature ejaculation


u had good punches that hit preety well a few played lines that was slight flip decent flow was good i like how u tryed to get complex a little bit nice verse 7.0/10




evil u dont even know the meaning,
evils wen i take my lyrics and let u feel them,
evils wen i take a knife and peel back ur skin,
put it in a bag send it back at u again,
u've gone mental ur runnin up the wall,
just count to 3 coz u cant rap at all,
ur so small u should leave RV,
need 9 lives coz u get killed every week,

what the hell was this? u'r bars are short as hell which aint help ya flow fix that up ya punches wasnt there it was more like u just talking i saw no effort no complexity noting i think u need to try harder next time

2.0/10
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