Voted For: evil

Sorry, but this battle was hella weak. Im gonna Feed yea anyways.

Yo, im gonna kill this emcee who thinks he is cold*
Your 17..and you can’t beat a 13 year old?*
^ Not bad personal if true... 5/10
Some pretend thug man I give you pity
You think you big? You couldn’t be big if you were pam Anderson tity
meh... 4/10
Im blowing you over like you were in a shipwreck just hanging on
Im sorry you probally be still sucking dicks like Elton john
1st line was irrelevant to the second seemingly...mabe if you gave an explanation for a connection. But no - 2/10
My disses are like you hitting a stone wall
Just 1 blow your still gona fall
uhhh... 2/10
Dude you rap and your from who the hells knows? Plz tell me your location
I beat you quick like a girl touch your dick and you had premature ejaculation
Wow^, are you threatening him, or are you telling him what you wanna do to him? 1/10
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I think all in all, you gotta hit harder with stronger punches, and better personals....
:14/50
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evil u dont even know the meaning,
evils wen i take my lyrics and let u feel them,
..........uhh? right...... I dont get it but mabe next time you'll fill me in with an explanation to your damnation. >1/10
evils wen i take a knife and peel back ur skin,
put it in a bag send it back at u again,
^not even whack. Just straight Random. .005/10
u've gone mental ur runnin up the wall,
just count to 3 coz u cant rap at all,
I dono why he should count to three at all.... but ill reward you with 3/10 for tryn
ur so small u should leave RV,
need 9 lives coz u get killed every week,
Same old "leave RV" shit, different pile....its been murdered a few million times im sure. 1/10.
5.005/40
D, you gotta start flowin more, and workin on your struc. Also try and use some more hard hitting personals.. and try and use words that rhyme too. Im sure you could do alot better.... just try harder.

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