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Well this was an okay drop...
You had good structure... i feel you should stop with the //
cuz it just makes ya verse look sloppy..
Next:You could really elevate on wordplay, and
stretch your vocab , ... Maybe if this was a little longer ,
it could have been better... but overall it needs elevation..
keep it up, just try to use better wordplay , and some punchlines..
keep it up ..
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