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Old 04-22-05, 04:34 PM   #9
Kawn Flixx
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This was a decent drop...
Like Solo said its alittle short , i feel if it was longer it could have been better..
your opener was funny, lol, sorta died , in the middle , then got alittle better..
Your structure was good ... i like your personals , and you had some nice personals...
keep it up i feel you can elevate on how you word your drop..
i feel some bars could have been better...


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