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Ha, damn this was hot... i was really feeling it..
You used some hot personals , some good punchlines..
Your structure was good , but why do you always start with capitals? in every word
i mean it looks cool, just asking...
Overall this was a dope peice.. i just feel it. lacked alittle creativity..
it was good but sorta died near the middle ... keep it up though , and
hope to see some more work from you ..
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