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This was okay... it could have been alot better..
If you had better structure first off... you need to try to match up your bars..
try to use some better personals , your punchlines were iight
i felt they could have been alittle better...
try to elevate on your wordplay , and vocab , ..
overall this was an okay , drop but it could have been alot better..
keep it up , and drop a link please or this will be closed
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