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Old 04-22-05, 07:06 PM   #16
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Voted For: CA$per

aight, the opener from Casper was...diffrent, i personally thought it was creative an it made me laugh, dessert an fluff kinda dont rhyme, but it still had nice wordplay in it...

closer was good too, diss was right on point, humouress once again, even thom it was simple wordplay, it had a good effect....

the rest of the verse was pretty on point also, flow was good, structure cannot be faulted, ya rhyme scheme on ah whole was nice....personals are not noticeable, but neither are they in OSB's verse....this battle was more about the punchlines...in which Casper hit hard, especially with the installment plan line, that was nice...dunno if it was true, but real good shit....OSB, Ya verse was decent, lines such as: the pins & needles bar, really had a good effect, wasnt feeling the opener, an i have seen better from you OSB, for the more creativity, conststancy an humour, my votes goes too CASPER

But the pins & needles line was the highlight of the battle, i was like ''oooh'' for a second

could yall RTF in any of my battles?
thanks yall

Peace out.
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