Voted For: OneStepBeyond

onestepbeyond took this one easily, even though he ducked me.

casper. your verse was too basic, you had that one good bar at the end, but too late to make up for 6 lines. you should try harder. also, the first line was stretched, and didn't rhyme, poor structure plagued the fuck out of it.

onestepbeyond. you had some good stuff in there, creative and nicely thought out. good structure, and personals really killed him. thats all i need to explain.

v/onestepbeyond...easily

ps (to casper)... dont use my name in your whack battles, ever.

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