Ah'ight typing as I listen.....ok s-large first...sup son....awww u opened wit a weak/played line....awwww man ya punches are weak...quality is pretty good...u dubbed ya whole joint....damn u ain't have 1 quoteable punch damn these punches is weak...ya flow was cool but real repetitive u ain't change up....ya delivery too is real blan...u put some timely addlibs to offset ya somewhat monotoneness but it was still present...20 grand....u had some played shit too....neither one of y'all use anytype of wordplay....jus basic simile based punchlines...ya flow was cool u had good change uyps an delivery was cool da same as u usually do but it fit track...jus u said this was real lyrical an it wasn't...u had alot of punches but they wasn't hitting on nothing, real basic...ya lines had no shock value....no OHHHHHHHHH lines in there but it was decent other than that.

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