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Old 04-23-05, 12:34 AM   #8
Armada Da 187
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Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

votin for black

ight overall a nice verse but balck got this due to harder punches

black- ya flow was nice i was able to keep wit it the whole verse
ya strucutre was tight as well nice n easy to read
Punches- some a bit plaid but hit hard never the less
I liked this punch fam:
I'll let the tech spray, I got shit to hit you quick
And you couldn't "get some dick" if you had a "sex change"
(creative lol i was feelin it)
Multies- i really didnt see any so elevate on that
Personals - didnt see any so elevate on ya personals

C
flow- was a lil on in off but it was descent
punches- didnt really see anything hard fam elevate on those
strucutre it was descent could be a lil better though
personals- didnt see any fam
multies- none that i saw

both need to elevate on ya multies n personals bein put into yo verses

c get some harder punches that are more directed towards ur oppenent

good battle fams
rtf