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Old 04-23-05, 03:40 AM   #13
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Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

wow i wasn't expecting you to rip him after reading his verse....but his verse bored me like a lot of peoples verses....i laughed at yours it was funny, i like how you did the initial thing that was creative.....let's break it down like this sin ce i'm already talking about Ill right now we gonna keep on.....your punches were good hit hard....structure was no where near ass good as LC's but on audio you would be fine....your wordplay was good....your verse was just plain out hard that all there is to it

Now LC you had a tight verse....you tried puttin some multies in there but you should work on them.....you attacked him enough but your verse bored me....i dunno why it bored me like a lot of peoples verses do....don't get me wrong it was tight but it was boring no hate....your verse was decent in every category but Ill ripped you....
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