Voted For: Daubs

okaaay...
black? ya opener was of any irrevlivence????...i dont ever see Daubs sayin' he ''gangsta''...
an the oven mits may have been ILL AS FUCK in ah freestyle, but it was more of ah self glory thing from you...so the opener conerning personals an disses, was not the strongest Black..

after the topener, i failed ta see the lines connecting???
there was no real flow, an half the time yo' shit didnt even rhyme....you stayed on how HE CANT BEAT YOU, An uppin yourself...concentrate more on personals, an making him look stupid, not biggin yourself...ya feel black?

Daubs:
first things first homeboy....dont seperate ya bars like that, shit looks uggglllyyy...
buit Daubs, ya had more creativity ta offer, punches could be improved, an the wordplay some what also...like the closer, ya builded it up real nice with the magaician line, then ya had like 5 words ta finish it off...just try using your ideas for punches an personals more effectively...

but still....ya stayed on topic, ya stayed with consistantly dissing black, you used personals (even if the opener seemed a little forced) you still had the better verse on the whole...creativity, personals....an actually stayin dissing your oppenent an not biggin yourself

vote/ Daubs

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