Easy to read due to the excellent flow you had mainly because of those nice multis you used. Vocab was good, and you had nice creativity in there when it comes to your wordplay and such. Also stayed consistent with it because many can keep it up for few lines but hardly for an entire piece so props for that. Concept been done before and self-glorifciation pieces are usually boring as hell but yours was good!

My favo lines was opener:

Im Too Hott for RapVerse, step back or catch shots to ya heart playa
Im the bread slaya, got bitches round me Breathin harder than Darth Vada
And thats just the half, got chicks with thick ass blowin me, tryin to get cash
The kid blast, u think its a Weight reducin drink the way ya Chest Slim-Fast

^^Nice stuff!

DQ

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