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Old 04-23-05, 11:19 AM   #4
Stanza
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Voted For: .K.onfliktz

Well This iS what I Think

konlfiktz
Ya Opened up pretty weak and I was MAd at you bcuz you always come hard in the begining but still you drop a good verse not your best bcuz i can see your facing a newb so ,,,...you didnt come your hardest and shit but you did aii ...Far as your verse goes You came witha few pucnhez they connected as usual But Yet Not hard as usual so Jus gonna tell you never let down you rgaurd like that you never know what newb can take the win but this newb didnt so you get my vote

k-trini
aii you did aii for a new your structure is what fiucked you up the most bcuz when your lines arent lined up with the rest of your verse it makes your verse that much harder to read and sometimes a voter wont even read ya verse they will jus keep goin on and give the vote to the other peson but i read your verse your best bar was your diss against his sig which still wasnt all dat but it was good for a newb if you ask me so all you need to do is elevate some more and youll start taking some wins more often NO HATE jus voting

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